Sunday, December 14, 2014

8. IELTS: Writing Task 2

In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it was valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this? Or, "Student should study and work together."


We observe in the western world that students work study together. They do not have economic hardship as we have in the third world. Their children work in the neighbor, work part time and earn to support their academic life.
However, some opines that children or students should not work as well as study. this emotional and unrealistic approaches to education prevent most of the students to gain valuable work experience. Experience is necessary component of a skilled labor, which can contribute to developing economy. But, we should not encourage children to to do full time paid-work that discourages them attending schools. Full-time child labor should be discouraged. Only part-time jobs are suitable for students.
In my opinion, students should work and study together. One main objective of having good working knowledge in a particular field is to help someone who finishes education and is looking for a job or any other self-employed profession. the world becomes very competitive in this decade, so having specific work experience will definitely make somebody to develop a career as a professional. For example, teaching is a profession that requires creativity and competence. A student can work as demonstrator in a lab and get his tution fee balanced through remuneration, obtained from the teaching assistance ship. Skilled labor like craftsman, driver, cook, shop attendent, caregiver, barbar etc needs practical experience. Therefore, gaining theoretical experience saves times, energy and money. Mowing neighbors' lawn, looking after children, pets, delivering newspaper and many more self-generating, exciting and creative jobs are in the list of growing up students. Moreover, work makes them responsibile and tidy  in their daily routine. The money earned from the labor may not be sufficient, but they develop workmanship and responsibility that are required for the fittest that survives. So, students in the rich rich countries amture at 18 and take overall responsibility for their survival. In the end, they become more prosperous and happier than their counterparts living under the social taboo, ego and superstition that prevent them from working  during their student lives.
In addition, various social jobs can benefit neighborhood and make good friendship among all neighbors. Respect for work, discipline, sinccerity, devotion, competence, preseverance etc. are extra valuable learning which can not achieved through theoretical educaton.
Therefore, I support my view with that students should study and work cocurrently to be successful in their early lives.

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