7. IELTS: Writing Task 2

"We should encourage women to join armed forces". What's your opinion of the topic?

Introduction

Men and women should have equal rights. We also observe in developed countries men and women enjoy almost the same and equal degree of freedom.

Problem

However, in developing and poor countries rate of education is poor. Poverty, unemployment, riligious barrier, superstitions and prejudices make us a very male dominating society. Our women are not encouraged for jobs, self employments like western women. they are mostly housewives and homemakers. Moreover, we are a Muslim country that discourages women to have formal jobs and encourages them to wear veils to appear in public. but we are a poor country and we need more jobs occupied by women.

Solution

But, nowadays women are not staying at their broken and unsafe homes. Poverty, hunger, unemployment change the role of our soviety. The most competent women share equal jobs and status aa men. They are also encoureged to join in army, navy and air force. In these forces, we need doctors, nurses, cook, and sweepers, cleaner and other household jobs. When a women works besides a man, the wwhole team is inspired and unites as a stronger force. In my country, we have awarded and honored our brave women who fought our liberation war in 1971. Moreover, women can join in different cultural and entertainment programs in armed forces those are highly required. We should encourage highly educated women to join forces in commissioned ranks. In addition, our women in education surpass men.

Example

Now they have better academic grades than men. they can serve as doctors, engineers and other technical positions suitable for them. In the Middle east war, we also observe a large of women marine soilders in US armed forces gathered in these highly religious Muslims countries. They also showed their competence in the war. Radical countries like Libya, Algeria, Afganistan, Iran and Iraq put a ban on women joining army. Moreover, women are not allowed to work outside in a Muslim radical country. Now it's a matter of relief that Bangladesh Army has allowed women to join forces.

Conclusion

Women have proved their efficiencies in some jobs at marketing, reception, secretariats, customer care, human resources, IT and computer based jobs, which are now increasing in large numbers. Some brave women now participate in space programs, research teams, and adventurous jobs. Therefore, I think women should join in defense forces.